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    In Biding Days



    How many times I’ve entered here

    with hope to hear your voice,

    in space where only

    silence greets.

    He meets me

    as unwelcome guest

    who crashes hallowed

    berth, no mirth or merriment

    to spend its bankroll fast among

    my grief. Each firm belief, however

    hefty at its heart, will swift depart

    upon such barren stage.

    Still I engage,

    for promises that

    soon and very soon

    we once again will share

    sweet repartee. You. And me.

    And hosts of angels there besides.

  • #2
    Nice to see a bit of 'concrete poetry', as I understand the term. Must have taken a lot of work to get it looking so neat and yet have it scan so fluently. Well done.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you The Great Depression. I'd actually formatted it with a left justification and tried centering it just for fun. I like the way it came out too!

  • #3
    When that time comes....

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you AtL - for taking time to look, comment, and leave a like. Much appreciated!
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