Retina

[Johntee]

Retina


Overhead dawn strains to risen sun

greys beset with flame roseate tern

errs from pearl to deeper coralline

infusions staining the span of sky

National Gallery nets an eye.

[amenOra]

Short and sweet and smooth, i love the middle portion! Such beaut---

[poemzone]

seeing pure glory in your words.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I love sunrise. It's a joy to watch a new day born and you've captured that wonder admirably.