Think of me

[tmetel]

We sit upon the grass today

I dwell in your caress

Softly in your hair I play

While pulling on your dress



Tender kisses on your face

Around your neck I glide

The outline of your form I trace

My stroke you do abide



Fingers cross your form in touch

My courage makes you quiver

Whispers offer you so much

With hope you start to shiver



Yearning for the love I give

A promise of the day

Sunshine true and flowers live

As hearts do run and play



Out of breath, I leave you friend

With the hope of many things

Think of me, the summer wind

With a sweetened kiss of spring

[amenOra]

lovely. the ending was perfect too. romantic, with the good command of syntax and delicate moody playful, depicting language. refreshing, i nearly can smell the 💐 flowers. kudos & thanks for sharing your poetry! peace

[RhymeLovingWriter]

A wonderful rendition displaying the power of suggestion on our memory, perception, and senses. Until I got to 'summer wind' in the second to last line, I had quite different thoughts in mind. I like when a poem does that to me and would that I could write the same.

Also, if you'd like me to amend your title to 'Think' - I could do that, just let me know.

[Johntee]

That would leave it treading on A Lloyd-Webber

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Good point.

[tmetel]

Thank you! And yes on the spelling correction.