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    No ocean but stranger danger

    the lands that border

    something other

    Un-American

    Ideas

    North nearing

    truth unsmeared

    South facing fear unfettered

    A Body of Thought press Enter.

  • #2
    Truth unsmeared a dangerous idea

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    • #3
      That ending, so sublime to my eye and ear. I can't figure out why, either. Love the construction, such symmetry pleases my senses. I was just thinking recently about the South, imagining an Angel pointing towards the North with a sword.

      That word... Unamerican. Cool poem, Johntee. Thank you for sharing

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      • Johntee
        Johntee commented
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        This came
        out of the stream
        in answer to America #3
        by Tanner. I was pleased
        with the result of constructing
        it on the spot, only requiring
        reformatting to shape
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