All The Moons

[lunar glide]

and other invertebrate fires
upon reflection and glowing
to do what she does with light
free ourselves of some solitude
expell a little sadness
soothe the order of things with salt
common expressions
soup's cold
love sees the sky
full and expanded
emerge all of the moons
giving pieces of dreams and kindness
what she does with light
transmits breath to moths
wings fresh cut from the garden
where nothing can't disappear
tended to in gold
kisses unrecycled
and other fires

[AlexandratheLate]

Common expressions altered into unique and beautiful descriptions. Well done poet!!

[lunar glide]

Thank you ATL 😁 was trying a different style glad you liked it.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

This has a beautiful flow LG. I agree with Alex - unique and beautiful phraseology.

[lunar glide]

Thank you RLW. Its a success to me when you leave a nice comment like that.

[amenOra]

It's always interesting to see the different "voice" in poetry. This is familiar yet not, to me... I like the style you've managed here. It has a sort of mundanity, or blasé feeling to it. The rhythm was off-beat, but there, you know, leading me to cloud these patterns in my mind, and I can relish them...
It basically reminds me of how I have spoken about my writing. If we can have good poetry, like candy, without rotten teeth or tummies, I would say, let's continue this writing exploration.
It has a sort of "infantine" feel to it. I feel that frames the poet in such a light that ... well it's beautiful. And I'm being ramble-y. Thanks for sharing. It also reminds me of a dream I had where eclipsed moons stood (like 5 of them arrayed) in the sky, moving image. Peace + Kudos.

[lunar glide]

Thank you! Yes i thought of you, for your exploring it all style. I appreciate your visit and comment.

[grant hayes]

This is a bit different from you, lunar glide; reins hang a little looser. Of course, the work is as wonderfully engaging as ever.
So much to relish here:
invertebrate fires
free ourselves of some solitude
soothe the order of things with salt
wings fresh cut from the garden (gasp! my favourite)
tended to in gold

Damn, I'm just quoting the whole thing. <3

[lunar glide]

Thank you Grant! I'm trying different wordplay but i have a great difficulty doing anything new.

[poemzone]

good work. really enjoyed the line "love see the skys" very powerful.

[lunar glide]

Thank you! I appreciate that