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  • Rainmaker

    When there is a need
    For a wish to come true
    Tear open the night sky
    Let it fall through
    Let it fall through

    Without thought
    I stand there, watching over
    I close my eyes, and say my wish
    Silently in my head
    Now, the storms come closer
    Let it fall down
    Let it fall down
    Let it rain down

    I take control
    Out of sight, and out of range
    I close my eyes, to say my wish
    Whilst feeling this cold air
    To envelop me
    Now, witness the sudden change
    Let it fall down
    Let it fall down
    Let it rain down
    Until all of you drown

  • #2
    I like the way this builds - like thunderheads on the horizon.

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    • #3
      love the repeat lines. something I must try in poetry.

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      • Bry89
        Bry89 commented
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        Repetition in poetry/lyrics is good if you know how to do it properly

    • #4
      Harsh revenge, but well built lyrics to bring it on, Bry!

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