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  • Frozen

    Frozen

    A frozen moment in time
    when your lips brushed over mine

    I swam slowly in dark pools,
    lured in as my eyes met yours

    Your touch made my heart quiver,
    my skin tingle and shiver

  • #2
    Frozen but no chill here but plenty of intensity

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  • #3
    smooth talker. blush blush.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Lol lol. Thank you poemzone.

  • #4
    Alexandra - I like what you've captured here. That unique "frozen moment" of romance is worldwide and responsible for marriages, children and people everywhere. So nice of you to give it poetic recognition. Makes me recall my "frozen moments" worth the quiver and the shiver. Now you got me TINGLING and I definitely don't want a cure. Thanks for the therapy. Thanks for the memories. Namyh

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  • #5
    Let it Flow! AtL! Lol! Nice Poem!

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    • #6
      Thank you very much Rhymeboy. 😊

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      • #7
        Second time around I noticed the "rhymes" of yours which I thought very cool. Short and very sweet

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      • #8
        Hello Alexandra, The poetic definition of a kiss and so beautifully defined. Luscious! Kind regards, Tony.

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        • #9
          Thank you Tony

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          • #10
            Thank you TS for the like

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            • #11
              Brief, but deeply emotive.

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              • #12
                Thank you very much Dwayne.

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                • #13
                  Thank you very much Darth for the like.

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                  • #14
                    The title is "Frozen" but the content belies the heat! Sizzle away AtL!

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                    • #15
                      Thank you for stopping by Paula and commenting.

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