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    DANCING ON THE FUSELAGE

    Dreaming in a color clave
    The mountain homes with their landscapes sparkle
    Grandma cuts the lush green lawn in theatrical fashion
    Smiling and singing, she’s been late for twenty years
    A king works diligently on denial
    His wives chit chat unaware in the fat food isle
    Leaving their wet boy to wonder out
    Sensing his vulnerability
    The false gods ignite the apocalypse
    Golden children flee to hide behind dwarfing stars
    Bringing the progenitors eternal night
    In the shrill blackness of the stage backdrop
    A penis plane comes crashing down
    May I suggest the pilot had been left alone
    With failure in hand and the certain fatal blow that will follow
    He lost the only two souls he had ever known
    After sudden impact
    The many left to die, dance hypnotically, demonically
    Dorsal side of the silver fuselage within hells glory
    Casting orange shadows upon severed arrangements
    Recessed spaces in indigo gravitational fabric anchor bulging eyes
    Beneath the out stretched serpent’s heaven
    The hills appear to be silhouettes of sleeping people, shivering in the cold
    Tomorrow there will be no awakening

    RDS
    THE SECOND

  • #2
    Another powerful piece an epic read

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    • #3
      I agree with Parkinsonspoet . The images this conjures are sad and frightening.

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      • #4
        Whoa!

        The clever diction and descriptive imagery, is simply spellbinding!

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        • #5
          Very powerful TS. Glad to see you posting again.

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          • #6
            Wow. Your work always sizzles and has great force. The ending left my mouth open.

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            • #7
              Wow, The second! A hallucinogic journey so powerfully presented!

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