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    Lanterns smile

    Pumpkin sentry

    Lit awhile

    As passers by

    Pause for their treat

    Candy so sweet

    To pick or trick

  • #2
    Wow, love this, I can see it all, nice evening summed up in 7 beautiful little lines

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    • #3
      Looking forward to this annual bit of fun. Nicely done PP!

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      • #4
        watch out no eggs about. little buckers trick or treat is what I got from this poetry.

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        • #5
          Succinct description.

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          • #6
            I'm officially ready for Halloween now. Haha
            Good times as a kid, fond memories.

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            • #7
              A ha'sonnet for Hallowe'en! Well done, Pp!

              More Tricks for Treats

              A parent of
              a little child
              shows off their love
              by getting wild
              to dress the fool
              as candy mule
              for more knocked doors
              Last edited by Muttado1sb; 10-27-2018, 06:58 PM.

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              • Parkinsonspoet
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                I like this one too

            • #8
              Hello Parkinsonspoet, You have captured it all so perfectly, with few words and poetically expressed to impress, and impressed, I am. well done indeed. All is good, I trust, Tony.

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              • #9
                Parkinsonspoet - Oh! Oh! I'm getting that trick-or-treat feeling all over again and kinda glad to be in the 'soup'. Nicely done P. Namyh

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                • Parkinsonspoet
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                  Thank you for kind words
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