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  • A Full Moon

    All at once
    Neither blown from a dreamer's pipe
    Or communicated from within
    Just the ease of soft immortality
    Emerged without effort
    From love

    Jazz without tension
    First kisses
    Without anything prior
    Allready kissed
    Our lips brought forth
    To work them out
    We'll be ourselves afterwards

    Our sides of the bridge
    Invisibly lit
    Merged from long waiting
    Dawn and liberty included
    Last edited by lunar glide; 10-17-2018, 07:00 PM.

  • #2
    Oh my.
    I would say our thoughts and feelings are pretty well aligned at the moment.
    I'll be thinking about that before I go to bed, thank you for sharing it. ^^

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thanks Dag. I appreciate the comment.

  • #3
    Beautiful as always LG - awash in moonglow this one has a soothing feel - and hope of continuity. Love it!

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    • lunar glide
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      Thank you RLW. Im glad the hope came through!

  • #4
    LG, nice poem. What’s not to love. Oh the moon.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thanks ATL. Always glad you enjoy the moon.

  • #5
    Hello lunar glide, Effortlessly beautiful, as if the moonlight itself: a term of endearment, and come the morn, one can be one's self again, out of the kiss of a dream, perhaps. A lovely, lovely verse. Fond regards, Tony.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thank you Tony yes dreams and poetry are related spells. Happy to see your comment.

  • #6
    Succinct, lyrical beauty.

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    • lunar glide
      lunar glide commented
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      Thanks Dwayne! Much appreciated
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