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    old flame passed but presence felt for EVER 13.10.18







    the eyes did click
    did you feel like a wally
    was it salt in wound for a kick
    all safe as no trolley.
    billy boy not in need
    i am a lover and gentle
    if to provoke then you won't like read
    just in poetry i turn all mental.
    glad i exposed
    you are nothing but nasty
    the london programme arrogance needs to be decomposed
    national equality standard is ghastly.
    i don't care who is in pocket
    security, police, paper i can whether
    a disabled man with all in wrong socket
    you won't provoke me my no friend for EVER.

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    At first I didn't realise this was rhymed, and felt that it had such a great sound and rhythm. Then I looked back and saw the rhyme. That's how it is when rhyme is done right; it doesn't impose itself. Great stuff, poemzone.

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