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    Last edited by poemzone; 01-28-2019, 01:01 AM.

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    At first I didn't realise this was rhymed, and felt that it had such a great sound and rhythm. Then I looked back and saw the rhyme. That's how it is when rhyme is done right; it doesn't impose itself. Great stuff, poemzone.

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