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    Sunset serenade



    The beautiful colors of your sunset

    seduce and invite me to stay

    Your fair winds serenade me and whisper

    Sweet things in the language of love

    Sowing seeds of passion in my cold heart

    witnessed by the moon and the stars

  • #2
    me likes, it flows well and has a definite romantic flair which I consider yours... cool landscape to get lost in.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you amenOra. I appreciate it.

  • #3
    Alexandra - I heard the music. I've packed my bags. I'm ready to go. Most enjoyed this A. Namyh

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    • #4
      Thank you very much Namyh.

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      • #5
        I love the title! It sounds like a song! Lovely piece AtL!

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        • AlexandratheLate
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          Thank you very much Rhymeboy.

      • #6
        Hello Alexandra, The seeds of passion in a most tenderly beautiful verse. How lovely it all is - how could a heart be cold? Fond regards, Tony.

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        • AlexandratheLate
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          Thank you Tony. I really appreciate it.

      • #7
        You write very sensual poetry AtL. Sounds like a lovely place to be.

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        • AlexandratheLate
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          It was lovely and quite the inspiration.

      • #8
        Time unrhymed
        in Sunset serenade
        how readily it could be
        the language of love sings its lay
        Last edited by Johntee; 10-08-2018, 07:39 AM.

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        • #9
          Thank you very much Johntee.

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          • #10
            Thank you for the like RB.

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            • #11
              Thank you very much Mutaddo for the like.

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              • #12
                This is a dreamy serenade.

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                • #13
                  Thank you very much Dwayne

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                  • #14
                    It is quite unfortunate that you find your heart cold, but at least seeds of passion are sown to warm it up once grown.
                    Thank you for sharing! ^^

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                    • AlexandratheLate
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                      This is metaphorically speaking. This is like a rebirth of sorts from either having your heart broken or from being desensitized to the beauty around. I don’t think my heart is cold. Thank you for reading and commenting.

                  • #15
                    Thank you for the like.

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