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  • Getaway

    Get Away


    Gaunt show, the ribs of dawn

    cirrus wisps, fly-away zone

    ice-silvered herringbone.

    Ruler straight, pencil thin,

    con-trails scribe high cloud's pane.

    Last-gasps rush Summered Spain,

    tail-winds press Winter's gain.

  • #2
    Perfectly complete! Dazzling array of images, moods, feeling, and a nice ending ... I like where this brought me! Thanks

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    • #3
      ''...the ribs of dawn", a delicious phrase to set the form of this skyward piece. Bravo!

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      • Johntee
        Johntee commented
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        Are the snowbirds flying to Florida yet?

      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        I don't think just yet. Where I'm from, we still relish all four seasons!

      • Muttado1sb
        Muttado1sb commented
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        Wonderful getaway views, Johntee. My Mainiac relatives tell me November is usually when the snowbirds do their Florida migration. Though we have Canada Geese going Maryland through already.
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