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    Last edited by poemzone; 01-28-2019, 12:59 AM.

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    Read this a few times, me likes! Excellent name, I like your poem.and the title to boot. the broken sense in parts, where you veer off, seems to hold significance, so you start with an almost rap flavor, and get into word play, and the disjoint of the ideas I enjoy, I've come to notice! Rhymes were cool. Thanks for sharing, welcome to PoemZone ... poemzone

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    • #3
      I got a rap vibe from this too in parts.

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