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    Burnt Ochre


    Already the ghost Autumn cast

    uncalendar'd Mood Indigo

    a marinade of febrile winds

    drizzles over broken drought

    Dreamtime memory renders Ochre

    spattered hands shadows tender

    offerings to the wayside passed.

  • #2
    And an inward looking one, yes I've been feeling that certain "exhiliration" of the changing season...

    I love the word Dreamtime! And the vibe of these is very nice.
    Thanks

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    • #3
      Very nice Johntee. Liked the artistic rendering.

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      • Johntee
        Johntee commented
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        Thank you Alex, would that things might work so well always.

    • #4
      Again with the beautiful flow and picturesque phrasing...quite the capture of changing seasons.

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      • #5
        Allready! Yes. This is a true feeling and beautiful!

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        • #6
          such beautiful use of language -you are a master of the forum

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          • Johntee
            Johntee commented
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            I am a sufferer from the mood that changes as soon as the clouds gather
            which they have here over the past month. We've had more rain than rainbows.

          • Parkinsonspoet
            Parkinsonspoet commented
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            very true I have seen few rainbows recentlty

        • #7
          I wish the drought would break in my country.

          I find this poem beautiful.

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