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  • The Dining Dead

    The dining dead




    Like a bird on a thin high wire

    Her fragile heart he would require

    They had become the dining dead

    All their feelings remained unsaid


  • #2
    Wow, great title, and a well-caught moment. I like the terse style; suits the subject.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you Grant. I really appreciate it.

  • #3
    Agree - the dining dead - quite the phrase AtL.

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    • AlexandratheLate
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      Thank you Paula for the like and for your generous comment.

  • #4
    I started to think of like a genre or something, that this was reminiscent of, or reminded me of. It's just really beautiful, soul-ful enriched. And definitely I hear your "voice" in there that I've come to know through reading your posts!

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    • AlexandratheLate
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      Thank you very much amenOra.
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