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    Solar Mission


    Sunshine soft from photon fall

    hydrogen to helium haul

    of photosphere brings life

    to bear and Gaia, owing all

    to nature's chosen molecule,

    in a quantum leap tunnelled

    through corresponding chlorophyll,

    works out in emerald overalls

  • #2
    Nice mixture here. Like the end, all of it results in one little anonymous image "in overalls". I like the rhythm too, cool cool.

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    • Johntee
      Johntee commented
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      Thanks amenOra.
      I wondered if the
      American usage
      was cover-alls.

  • #3
    I like that ending line too JT - works out in emerald overalls - very clever!

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    • Johntee
      Johntee commented
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      The line, wrestled till it came,
      found me pleased.
      What's in a name?
      Maybe it should be dungarees.

  • #4
    Boy! Pulled from the dead-pile. What I used to be capable of.

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    • #5
      I don't think there's any "used to" about it - your posts captivate and delight!

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      • #6
        Originally posted by Johntee View Post
        Solar Mission


        Sunshine soft from photon fall

        hydrogen to helium haul
        programs to track on Telegram

        of photosphere brings life

        to bear and Gaia, owing all

        to nature's chosen molecule,

        in a quantum leap tunnelled

        through corresponding chlorophyll,

        works out in emerald overalls
        Very cool, I like it!
        Last edited by JohnKlein94; 08-03-2022, 08:24 AM.

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        • #7
          I could picture this quite vividly. Very nicely done.

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