Solar eMission

[AlexandratheLate]

I could picture this quite vividly. Very nicely done.

[JohnKlein94]

Solar Mission


Sunshine soft from photon fall

hydrogen to helium haul
programs to track on Telegram

of photosphere brings life

to bear and Gaia, owing all

to nature's chosen molecule,

in a quantum leap tunnelled

through corresponding chlorophyll,

works out in emerald overalls

Very cool, I like it!

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I don't think there's any "used to" about it - your posts captivate and delight!

[Johntee]

Boy! Pulled from the dead-pile. What I used to be capable of.

[Johntee]

The line, wrestled till it came,
found me pleased.
What's in a name?
Maybe it should be dungarees.

[Johntee]

Thanks amenOra.
I wondered if the
American usage
was cover-alls.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I like that ending line too JT - works out in emerald overalls - very clever!

[amenOra]

Nice mixture here. Like the end, all of it results in one little anonymous image "in overalls". I like the rhythm too, cool cool.

[Johntee]

Solar Mission


Sunshine soft from photon fall

hydrogen to helium haul

of photosphere brings life

to bear and Gaia, owing all

to nature's chosen molecule,

in a quantum leap tunnelled

through corresponding chlorophyll,

works out in emerald overalls