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  • AlexandratheLate
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    I could picture this quite vividly. Very nicely done.

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  • JohnKlein94
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    Originally posted by Johntee View Post
    Solar Mission


    Sunshine soft from photon fall

    hydrogen to helium haul
    programs to track on Telegram

    of photosphere brings life

    to bear and Gaia, owing all

    to nature's chosen molecule,

    in a quantum leap tunnelled

    through corresponding chlorophyll,

    works out in emerald overalls
    Very cool, I like it!
    Last edited by JohnKlein94; 08-03-2022, 08:24 AM.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    I don't think there's any "used to" about it - your posts captivate and delight!

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  • Johntee
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    Boy! Pulled from the dead-pile. What I used to be capable of.

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  • Johntee
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    The line, wrestled till it came,
    found me pleased.
    What's in a name?
    Maybe it should be dungarees.

  • Johntee
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    Thanks amenOra.
    I wondered if the
    American usage
    was cover-alls.

  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    I like that ending line too JT - works out in emerald overalls - very clever!

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  • amenOra
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    Nice mixture here. Like the end, all of it results in one little anonymous image "in overalls". I like the rhythm too, cool cool.

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  • Johntee
    started a topic Solar eMission

    Solar eMission

    Solar Mission


    Sunshine soft from photon fall

    hydrogen to helium haul

    of photosphere brings life

    to bear and Gaia, owing all

    to nature's chosen molecule,

    in a quantum leap tunnelled

    through corresponding chlorophyll,

    works out in emerald overalls
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