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    End of Day




    seated lone

    urge to write
    up-bounds...

    found

    cocoon where
    storm of life
    transforms
    to pulse on paper
    tapered
    slow

    steady

    stripped

    stalled

    palled
    at pass of time
    to reach such glen

    where noisy needs
    succumb
    to waited wants

  • #2
    I like the tight, intensely musical minimalism of this, Rhymist. Much is said with a potent little. I feel that paring things back like this makes us focus on the sonorities of every word.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you Grant, for the like and comment. Writing this was a nice change of pace for me.

  • #3
    RLW How do you get your pieces
    to centre like this rather than auto tab left?
    Mine come of a tablet centred but end up left.
    Right, I've just answered my question by going into
    Underline A
    Last edited by Johntee; 08-06-2018, 08:52 AM.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      By George - he's got it! It took me awhile to find it too, and I still have problems with special formatting. Really glad you found it!

  • #4
    Lighthearted RLW.

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Yes, I try to capture those moments too - it's all mixed up together for me - the ups and downs and whatevers. Thank you for taking a look and leaving a note!
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