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  • Vapor

    Something simple and deep for a change . . . This one too is about 4 yrs old now

    VAPOR

    Man is but a vapor
    A wisp of cloudy air
    He lingers for a moment
    And then he is not there

  • #2
    You've captured so much with so little with this gem.
    I often struggle against this feeling and wrote this that you may also enjoy

    https://forum.rhymezone.com/forum/ma...8119-withering

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      Thank You BiocideJ I appreciate the link . . . and I really enjoyed your poem . . . and so did many others! It generated a great deal of interesting responses . . . which is what good poetry does! Again well done!

  • #3
    Yes. This rhyme is perfect.

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    • Rhymeboy
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      Thank You lunar glide

  • #4
    Just like the Bible says we are but a mist. Nicely done.

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      Thanks AlexandrtheLate

  • #5
    Rhymeboy, Simple, Profound & Elegant!

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    • Rhymeboy
      Rhymeboy commented
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      Thanks Tanner!

  • #6
    ephemeral true
    both me and you and all who
    once wore solid skin

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    • Rhymeboy
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      Nice thought provoking response poem

  • #7
    This eyed and strutting vapour,
    this you, and me, and other
    apes the solid soil
    and shape of weather
    well enough to train us
    that we matter, being matter.

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    • Rhymeboy
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      Nice and deep! Well done grant hayes!
      Last edited by Rhymeboy; 08-07-2018, 02:42 PM.
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