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  • Discloser!

    *Disclosure!

    Not entirely a representative of my own thoughts, but fun to write

    Aim down the scope
    Look through and squeeze
    Bringing all to the knees
    No apologies
    Street philosophies
    Bring big dollar dreams
    Snoop and collard greens
    Proof pudding solid beans
    After autumn leaves
    Snowflakes fall and freeze
    Following calming breeze
    Swallowed by disease
    Wrapped up in all of these
    Oddities
    Monopolies
    Slaughter house
    Call the sheeps
    Total numerologies
    Human holocaust
    Fall asleep in tall trees
    Last edited by anonemus; 05-25-2018, 08:48 AM. Reason: Whoops with the title lol written after a long night

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    I've not been as active in the Zone, so perhaps you've been doing it awhile - but this seems a huge departure from much of your earlier works. The short line/syllable counts give it a staccato action moving rapidly from start to finish.

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    • anonemus
      anonemus commented
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      I've been meaning to write and post more. I love the community and website. This one came to me last night and was written to a beat.
      https://youtu.be/CJFT9AganZM
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