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  • Soul Rub


    I strode from my abode

    With reckless stride

    Taunting the fates

    As I sought to solve

    Loves mysteries

    Lacking fluency

    In it's language




    Squawk cross purpose talk

    Inane natter

    As I practiced patter

    For my introduction

    Silver tongued

    Seduction

    To cool for school




    I hesitate

    Hazy enunciate

    I proclaim I wish

    To message her soul

    Off come her shoes

    Our eyes meet she says

    I may rub her feet




    Confronted by corns

    Bunions forlorn

    Regretful mingle

    Better off single

    Love still awaits

    My unready fate

    One day will come

  • #2
    All what i can say is thumbs up 👍👍. Well done my friend keep up the work.

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      Thank you I appreciate your support

  • #3
    So... SOLE rub? Not sure if it was intentional double meaning, but I enjoyed this and the twistat the end.

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      yes it was an intentional double meaning. We sometimes take dating too seriously and forget about fun.

  • #4
    Seemed serious up until the corns and bunions, where it became jocular and outrageous. lol nice set up and execution. You spelled "massage" as "mEssage".

    Take care

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      The spelling was deliberate I was trying to message her soul and due to poor enunciation came across as an offer to massage feet. In truth I wasat the start intending to write something more serious but my heart wasn't in that

    • amenOra
      amenOra commented
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      Oh see cuz I read it as not a typo at first then I looked back and wasn't sure. Nice, nice.

  • #5
    You always manage to disarm me with your wit.

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    • Parkinsonspoet
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      Good to see you, always pleased if I have made you smile
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