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  • Fear and Hurtfulness

    Afraid of the words that might hurt

    They are always keeping me alert

    Cause one word can be enough

    To remove the bond that you once loved so fond

    So lets not be window blind and be tough

    We all are intertwinded in an chemical bond

    So be in peace of mind before you respond.

    Beware of the words dripping of your lips

    They can make your correspond feel conned

    So be thoughtfull of your scripts

    They might lead to a personal apocalyps

  • #2
    Great truth nicely presnted



    Afraid of the words that might hurt

    They are always keeping me alert

    Cause one word can be enough

    To remove the bond that you once loved so fond

    So let's not be window blind and be tough (note suggestion)

    We all are intertwinded in an chemical bond

    So be in peace of mind before you respond.

    Beware of the words dripping off your lips (note suggestion)

    They can make your correspond feel conned (I get your thought. Correspond is not the right word)

    So be thoughtfull of your scripts

    They might lead to a personal apocalyps

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    • Johntee
      Johntee commented
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      Shouldn't it be correspondent?

  • #3
    thnx! , yes i thought i was wrong about that , but i liked how it sounds in the sentence.

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    • #4
      So true. We can never take the words back once spent - I work on this mindfully every day - sometimes with more success than others. Thank you.

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