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  • amenOra
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    Enjoyed this one a lot. First two lines were great openers. The simile between stars and stones was well done, with the alchemy of the middle "couplets". By the end it was something different to me, striking beauty!

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    started a topic Stones

    Stones

    To become a stone
    They are the fruit of the stars

    I recall their passion
    Having cooled from fiery life

    At its core into new life
    To sit and wait in the world

    Now their joy is pure silence
    They rest on their laurels





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