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  • A Nature's Breeze

    Standing in the hall

    Smelling the days dawn

    Ray of Sunshine on my head

    Nothing needs to be said

    The smell of the house makes me yawn

    The door is always open

    Even for those who crawl

    Nature lurking around the corner

    A breeze goes threw my hair

    This feeling is so rare

    Lets not compare

    Jumping of the threshold

    Just be bold

    Nothing to withhold

    Everything will unfold



  • #2
    Simple, carefree, easy. Thanks for sharing!

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    • #3
      I notice from "Shyness" English isn't your first language.

      In "A breeze goes threw my hair" although the sound
      is right, the spelling threw is the past case of throw
      it should be "A breeze goes through my hair"

      I like the poem, although in my house
      it doesn't need an open door for nature
      (insects) to find a way in.

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      • #4
        Thnx amenora , with pleasure and thnx for the feedback johntee .

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        • #5
          A beautiful and captivating snapshot

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