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    Subject to Some real Proof,
    Limited now To a Spoof.
    Including me As in the Dark,
    Always seems to Miss the Mark.


    Read it’s ‘bout Perception Level,
    This no Reason all should Revel.
    Rhyme or In just simple Prose,
    Please don’t Fall within it’s Throes.




  • #2
    Wow Bob! For some inexplicable reason, I felt compelled to read your rhyme... please and thank you! I couldn't stop myself!

    Christina

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    • #3
      Not certain what you mean? Nothing that I did purposely I hope?

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      • #4
        I enjoyed this, nice playing with form, and the ending completed the poem nicely

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        • #5
          Thank you.

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          • #6
            Very funny!

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            • #7
              Thank you.

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              • #8
                Subliminal messenger,
                the lure hidden in the flicker.
                Banned since TV's infancy.
                I wonder if today
                standards would be
                set so readily.

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                • #9
                  Thank you.

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