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Excellent, so much in so few powerfully constructed words. Still love your writing, Tanner!
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AmenOra, Today I suddenly remembered a late night phone call from many many years ago to a "hoped to be" girlfriend, which did not pan out, so to speak.
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I enjoyed the effect the assonance made with the ending, like O-o-o... dial-tone!
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Lunar Politics
From the curled
Black contraption he
Heard her say "I haven't
Been avoiding you" as
That voice disappeared
Down his ear hole
He stood deaf and
Almost blind while
Outside silence echoed
Past the moon also
Vacant like his telephoneLast edited by Tanner; 04-18-2018, 02:39 PM.Tags: None
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