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    From the curled
    Black contraption he
    Heard her say "I haven't
    Been avoiding you" as
    That voice disappeared
    Down his ear hole
    He stood deaf and
    Almost blind while
    Outside silence echoed
    Past the moon also
    Vacant like his telephone
    Last edited by Tanner; 04-18-2018, 02:39 PM.

  • #2
    I enjoyed the effect the assonance made with the ending, like O-o-o... dial-tone!

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    • #3
      AmenOra, Today I suddenly remembered a late night phone call from many many years ago to a "hoped to be" girlfriend, which did not pan out, so to speak.

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      • amenOra
        amenOra commented
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        Poetry is the ability to fill out each moment with a past present future gauge. But usually we miss one of the three or a combination. What am I saying?
        Well, it made for good poetry!

    • #4
      Nice one Tanner.

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      • #5
        Excellent, so much in so few powerfully constructed words. Still love your writing, Tanner!

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