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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Rhymetime

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much imrogue

  • rhymetime
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    As I read this I walked through the old, forgotten house. I heard the music and watched the elegant couples laugh and waltz around the ball room as the crystalline light reflected their joy.
    Then I was lead down a dark, dank passageway at the end of which was a door labeled “TRUTH". Beyond the door, hidden from the dancers and the joy and the music, dwelt loneliness, pain, emptiness and tears.
    Both the splendor and the squalor tell the story of life. What a vivid metaphor.

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  • imrogue
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    A twist for a mystery...

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Piper.

  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Patricks.

  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you so much amenOra. Truly appreciate your reading and commenting.

  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Darth. I really appreciate it.

  • pipersfancy
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    I was going to comment on how I love going through old homes, the nostalgic places where grandparents and great-grandparents grew up... I love tapping into the emotions evoked by such places... and then I got to your final two lines. CREEPY!!! (And, I got myself right back out the door!)

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  • patricks
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    Brilliant poem! Loved every word about it

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  • amenOra
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    Sprawling, voluminous, and a nice end cap of Such a stirring vibration. Thanks for sharing, loved the dancing language and all of it, really!

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  • Darthvader
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    Brilliant write, AtL!!!!

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much NY sonnet for the like.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Micworthy for the like

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Johntee.

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