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  • haiku 3+ 3

    a few days ago

    fog in golden hair
    can spoil occasion
    Year of the Dog


    rooster crows
    wind tickles her feet
    he leaves coffee, cold


    wind smells of thirst
    clouds hesitate
    distant drumming

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    today


    whole grains and fruit
    personal trainer- timeout
    first stop donut shop


    old slippers
    cold tile on soft feet
    Springtime



    coffee black
    reading James Russel Lowell
    mourning dove



  • #2
    You live a full life Suz-zen. Welcome back from hibernation.

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    • #3
      Welcome back Suz-zen. Love these!!

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      • Suz-zen
        Suz-zen commented
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        Thanks Alex!!

    • #4
      A grand re-entrance of spring and the flower and your words so missed and so welcomed Thank You

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      • Suz-zen
        Suz-zen commented
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        much appreciated The second! always 'the first' in my book.

    • #5
      Concur with all above.

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      • Suz-zen
        Suz-zen commented
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        I know that you are swamped, Paula- reading and commenting takes time and trouble. Thank you

    • #6
      Whole grains donuts
      gets a snicker,
      resolutions
      dying quicker.

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