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    Written on that wall



    Kiss my lips once more, hold me tightly in your arms

    So that I may go into the darkness knowing that at one time I dreamt I tasted heaven

    Heaving sighs of what my life could have been

    As I watched the taillights of your car driving out of my life.


    I remember what was written on that wall

  • #2
    Sad, but not bitter. A more amicable break-up. Nicely written, AtL!

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    • #3
      Thank you very much Mutaddo. I was starting to think this was a failure.

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      • Muttado1sb
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        Definitely not a failure, AtL! It just got lost in the shuffle of so many new posts.

    • #4
      No failure here ATL! I've read it several times, and each time wonder what exactly might have been written on that wall. Because it could be so many things, different for each reader. That last line leaves me with an enigmatic feeling.

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      • AlexandratheLate
        AlexandratheLate commented
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        Thank you very much Paula. I really appreciate it.

    • #5
      "Rein de rein"
      what else could
      it have been

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      • #6
        Thank you very much a Johntee.

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        • #7
          I walked right over that hop scotch game, where once the children played

          Chalked outlined, faded by the rain

          Reminisce away, another beauty.

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        • #8
          ATL THis conjures up so many diff scenarios all ending in a tender goodbye. You scoff at failure but this is not even close to that. TY

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          • #9
            Thank you very much TS.

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            • #10
              very engaging leaves you guessing wanting to know what was on that wall

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              • #11
                Thank you very much Jon for reading and commenting.

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                • #12
                  Thank you very much Peter.Dee for the like.

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                  • #13
                    Beautiful, Alexandra. My, you have a way with words

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                    • AlexandratheLate
                      AlexandratheLate commented
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                      Thank you very much Darth. I really appreciate your comments.

                  • #14
                    I've enjoyed coming back here and seeing some of the beautiful poetry that everyone has written. And this, Alexandra... Well, I tip my hat to you and concur most heartily with what Darthvader said.

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                    • AlexandratheLate
                      AlexandratheLate commented
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                      Thank you very much NY. I really appreciate it. You have been missed.

                  • #15
                    Thank you very much amenOra for the like.

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