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  • Home Run

    Home Run (after MHenry's advise)



    Strike One


    I see the task

    now laid out plain

    but can I ask

    a rhyme, that fain

    would fall outside

    the plan, to slide

    in place, third base.


    Strike Two


    For a sennight

    I've been on it.

    A running fight,

    beastly sonnet,

    thrust and parry

    only carry

    half way. today.


    Strike Three


    Strike three, third crime

    recidivists

    Folsom life term.

    Ghost among ghosts,

    rhythm on track

    The Man in Black.

    Dream time paradigm.
    Last edited by Johntee; 03-14-2018, 05:00 AM.

  • #2
    Cool ending. "Sennight" is a new one!!

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    • #3
      very nicely done particularly the last line. The concept tis great and it is so well executed.

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      • #4
        By George, (or John, or Paul, or Ringo) - I think he's got it!

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