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    This was from years ago when I was in an abusive relationship.




    I will rise


    I existed because of You

    One of many webs of useless relationships

    Broken bridges between what we see and who we are

    I smiled while my heart wept

    And like the clouds give into the breeze

    I gave into loving you

    But my ashes will rise from the flames

    For even the darkest night gives way to dawn

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    This is serious matter, but all I could think was that we should give you a new nickname...Phoenix. What do you think?

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much Paula. I really appreciate it.

  • #3
    for even the darkest night gives way to dawn- I salute your rise and mourn that it was needed Excellent poem that climaxes perfectly

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    • #4
      Thank you very much Jon.

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      • #5
        At a certain age
        the urge
        to relate fades
        to the vice of verse.
        It could be worse.

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        • #6
          Thank you very much Johntee.

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          • #7
            Great poem, i really like it) Great thought, and written pretty nice)

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            • #8
              Thank you very much Collins.Jordan for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it.

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              • #9
                Thank you very much TS for the like.

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                • #10
                  I smiled while my heart wept. I love this line ATL. So vulnerable. Inspiring poem...

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                  • #11
                    Thank you very much SG.

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                    • #12
                      Thank you very much for the like Mutaddo.

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