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  • Into The Blue

    Nothing can quite explain
    The way that I feel right now
    I can hold my head up
    Above this dark abyss
    But I feel, I might as well drown

    In a fragile state
    In too deep
    Into the blue
    In where I'm at a loss
    Never to be freed
    I slowly bleed

    In and out of my conscious
    All my futures, in suspension
    I try to fight this curse
    But it only drags me lower
    Worsening this aggression

    In a fragile state
    In too deep
    Into the blue
    In where I'm at a loss
    Never to be freed
    I slowly bleed

    If hope doesn't pull me through
    I will die here, so peacefully
    Into the blue

    In the chamber of suffering
    I don't know why it came to be
    My indecision, my carelessness
    I guess i'll just suffer here alone
    'Til I can no longer see

  • #2
    A deeply sad soliloquy, drawn out to ends 'limbotic'.

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    • #3
      Bry89, I love the feel of this poem, especially “In and out of my conscious
      All my futures, in suspension.” What a great piece of writing.

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      • Bry89
        Bry89 commented
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        Thank you very much
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