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  • #16
    Thank you for the like Sister Greed! How about joining the fun!?

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  • #17
    Home Run (after MHenry's advise)


    Strike One


    I see the task
    now laid out plain
    but can I ask
    a rhyme, that fain
    would fall outside
    the plan, to slide
    in place, third base.


    Strike Two

    For a sennight
    I've been on it.
    A running fight,
    beastly sonnet,
    thrust and parry
    only carry
    half way today.

    Strike Three

    Strike three, third crime
    recidivists
    Folsom life term.
    Ghost among ghosts,
    rhythm on track
    The Man in Black.
    Dream time paradigm.

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    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Well done! I think this is more of a home run than a strikeout, Johntee!

    • MHenry
      MHenry commented
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      This is child's play for you, johntee! Well Done!

  • #18
    Home Run (after MHenry's advise)



    Strike One

    I see the task
    now laid out plain
    but can I ask
    a rhyme, that fain
    would fall outside
    the plan, to slide
    in place, third base.


    Strike Two

    For a sennight
    I've been on it.
    A running fight,
    beastly sonnet,
    thrust and parry
    only carry
    half way today.

    Strike Three

    Strike three, third crime
    recidivists
    Folsom life term.
    Ghost among ghosts,
    rhythm on track
    The Man in Black.
    Dream time paradigm.

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    • #19
      Sorry about that By the time I found there was a second
      page I'd entered it twice and can't get rid of the spare copy.

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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        Persistence paid
        its dividend
        when out you played
        this rhyming trend.
        No metaphor -
        please send us more.
        Play ball -ya'all.

    • #20
      Casey at bat
      bases loaded
      under his hat
      ego bloated
      here come's the pitch
      he rips the stitch!
      grand slam, hot damn!


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      • RhymeLovingWriter
        RhymeLovingWriter commented
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        From snowman to showman - we are traveling a bit in a new direction now.
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