I nearly fell - ha'sonnet

[MHenry]

Thank you for the like Sister Greed! How about joining the fun!?

[RhymeLovingWriter]

I agree. The more the merrier!

[Johntee]

Home Run (after MHenry's advise)


Strike One


I see the task
now laid out plain
but can I ask
a rhyme, that fain
would fall outside
the plan, to slide
in place, third base.


Strike Two

For a sennight
I've been on it.
A running fight,
beastly sonnet,
thrust and parry
only carry
half way today.

Strike Three

Strike three, third crime
recidivists
Folsom life term.
Ghost among ghosts,
rhythm on track
The Man in Black.
Dream time paradigm.

[Muttado1sb]

Well done! I think this is more of a home run than a strikeout, Johntee!

[MHenry]

This is child's play for you, johntee! Well Done!

[Johntee]

Home Run (after MHenry's advise)



Strike One

I see the task
now laid out plain
but can I ask
a rhyme, that fain
would fall outside
the plan, to slide
in place, third base.


Strike Two

For a sennight
I've been on it.
A running fight,
beastly sonnet,
thrust and parry
only carry
half way today.

Strike Three

Strike three, third crime
recidivists
Folsom life term.
Ghost among ghosts,
rhythm on track
The Man in Black.
Dream time paradigm.

[Johntee]

Sorry about that By the time I found there was a second
page I'd entered it twice and can't get rid of the spare copy.

[RhymeLovingWriter]

Persistence paid
its dividend
when out you played
this rhyming trend.
No metaphor -
please send us more.
Play ball -ya'all.

[MHenry]

Casey at bat
bases loaded
under his hat
ego bloated
here come's the pitch
he rips the stitch!
grand slam, hot damn!

[RhymeLovingWriter]

From snowman to showman - we are traveling a bit in a new direction now.