Concave convex *

[The second]

CONCAVE CONVEX

Inside the skull
A universe explodes
The division grows
Unimaginable distance
Complex moving colors
Calculations beyond the speed of light
Mother’s milk flows
The baby needs the fat
Discovering that
Disconnection of space and matter
Pushed in between dimensions
Warm muffled association
Terminal atmosphere
Inevitable separation
Why?
White sounds of uncontrollable distortion
Your eyes open
And with your first precious breath
All you can do is cry

RDS
THE SECOND

[Johntee]

Before and after,
partition, parturition.
All is novelty
billions have seen before.

[The second]

Yes so I thank you Greatly

[amenOra]

I feel that -- stages inside stages even 30 years later ... i like it, a different take on "birth". Cerebral but sensible to "matter", "attachment".

Thanks for sharing The second!

[The second]

Many your welcomes Amen Thank you

[rhymetime]

This is so well conceived and presented. I wish we could show it to a new born and get a reaction.

I also think we experience this each time we fully find newness in our lives. What comes to mind first is the first time we fall in love.

great verse

[The second]

Yes I guess your right new love is a birth. Thats what babies are, new love Thank you