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  • Parkinson's Parade





    Day after day

    Life's Procession

    Parkinson's on parade




    Step with shuffle

    Modest arm swing

    An army at the gait




    Mask uniform

    Blank in aspect

    Stoneyface synchronized




    Present arms shake

    Bearing tremor

    Worriers manoeuvre




    Dyskinesia

    Drilled everyday

    Operation unrest




    Exercise end

    In frozen halt

    Parkinson's on parade

  • #2
    Substantia Nigra,
    so small
    yet control
    rests
    on the littlest

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      Small but significant which also describes your verse

  • #3
    Again, I appreciate how you take a difficult situation and turn it into verse. I'm so glad you're doing what you're doing - both raising awareness and using your talents.

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      I am lucky I have so much including many good friends thank you

  • #4
    Such an insight, delivered with surgical precision and devoid of emotion yet invoking it in the reader. I think id grant hayes were around he would say 'top drawer'

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      Thank you for venturing into Grants drawers for me

    • rhymetime
      rhymetime commented
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      Where is Grant?

    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      not sure haven't heard from him for a while

  • #5
    You are a hero to me. You never fail to put my life in perspective.
    as I move forard I hope I can maintain your perspective

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      I am honoured thank you

  • #6
    Very well done Jon. Truly inspiring.

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      thank you Alexandra

  • #7
    You’ve won our hearts Jon. Hope and courage through adversity is who you are.

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  • #8
    I missed the live parade, so I had to watch the televised replay and I’m glad I got to. Yours is a true parade of strength, Parkinsonspoet!

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      thank you for your kind comment

  • #9
    Brilliant!

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