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    Veil of life




    Hidden in the veil of nature is a touch of sorrow

    In the folds of these moments

    Time is held and then released

    Like a prayer of love the angels recite

    Our bodies burn in the flame of love

  • #2
    "Hidden in the veil of nature is a touch of sorrow."
    That sentence alone is a poem. It captured my heart and my thoughts.
    simply inspired!

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much Rhymetime for your comment.

  • #3
    Sorrow is a woman's part
    born of a caring heart.
    Can life remain
    if it depart.

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    • AlexandratheLate
      AlexandratheLate commented
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      Thank you very much Johntee for your comment.

  • #4
    And what sweet fuel life is...if spent in love.

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    • #5
      Thank you very much Paula for your comment.

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      • #6
        "In the folds of these moments" - love that line, it made me look at my own hands as if I was holding something, nicely done - thank you

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        • #7
          Thank you very much Mooneyblack. I really appreciate your comments.

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          • #8
            Thank you for the like.

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            • #9
              Wow. What a gorgeous poem.

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              • #10
                Thank you very much SG. I really appreciate it.

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                • #11
                  I agree with rhymetime that the first line is a poem unto itself, then the rest builds from it. Lovely, AtL!

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                • #12
                  I also agree the first line set the tone and engaged me but the rest followed it very well

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                  • #13
                    Thank you very much Jon.

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                    • #14
                      Thank you for the like TS.

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                      • #15
                        Thank you for the like Rhymeboy. I really appreciate it.

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