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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much TS.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Rhymetime. I really appreciate it.

  • The second
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    As always ATL passion passion passion very nice

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  • rhymetime
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    Like all your work this verse touch my heart

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you Mutaddo for the like. I really appreciate it.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Bobby. I really appreciate it.

  • Bobby Del Boy
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    I see you in this light Alexandra. Reflecting beauty, wisdom and grace.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Jon.

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  • Parkinsonspoet
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    I liked the reflection here examined the sadness in a calm way with excellent imagery

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you for the like.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much amenOra for reading and commenting. I really appreciate your comment.

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    I used it as a contraction of ‘it is’ and I looked up cliches on the web and ‘danced or dances to the beat of my heart’ was not listed as a cliche but rather ‘dance to the beat of a different drum’.

  • amenOra
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    minor, inconsequential error: 'it's' shouldn't have an apostrophe unless it's a contraction: "it's/it is."

    I loved the poem. It was beautiful, capturing. However I feel at its most strong part, the sort of pivot, you say "dance to the beat of my heart"; and I am sure this could be better said, not so cliche? Personally I feel it would have more effect "otherwise".

    It reminded me of staying centered, on an axis, even while things are uneven! The flow and stresses on words pulled me through, and I am glad to be here~

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  • AlexandratheLate
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    Thank you very much Paula. I really appreciate.

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  • RhymeLovingWriter
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    Really beautiful imagery here AlexandratheLate , despite the sad tone. I can even envision the tears watering the tree.

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