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  • Lessons

    Hear my song hear my confession
    Journey of life we learn many lessons
    Lessons in life lessons in love or loss
    Bearing our baggage bear your own cross

    Promises were made promises uttered
    Thoughts of future mind so cluttered
    No room for present clarity
    Choose to be blind not able to see

    I had found my love, life completed
    I had found my love, sense retreated
    I had found my love, but felt cheated
    I had fooled myself, but not defeated

    A perfect match and so it seems
    You still inhabits all my dreams
    In the dark shadow of my mind
    I would illuminate or rewind

  • #2
    What beautiful lyrics this would make - and not only because you opened with the word 'song'. Do you have a melody in mind for it? This is a longer form (line length/count) than some of your usual work. I like it.


    • Johntee
      Johntee commented
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      It features in "Hear my song, Vio-le-etta, hear my song beneath the moon." a romantic ballad that likely is too old for you to know.

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thanks Johntee - I went to find it and really enjoyed the melody. I can see how you heard that in this.

  • #3
    Poetic, melodic, terrific!


    • #4
      Very sensitive with a sense of wanting.