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    Lost in your stare

    Myself I share

    Without a choice

    Weakens my voice




    Man in the mask

    Nothing to ask

    Guise of unwise

    See empty eyes




    Hide in plain sight

    Just see my blight

    Tricked by image

    Causes real damage




    Inside or out

    Consumed by doubt

    Do I perceive?

    Do I believe?




    My soul reflect

    Mirror effect

    It does reveal

    I am still real




    Ego intact

    Still me is fact

    Try this I dare

    Look when you stare

  • #2
    A great message and I love this stripped back style

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      thank you I appreciate your feedback

  • #3
    A 'reflective' piece, Parkinsonspoet . I agree with mooneyblack - you do this style/format quite well. Your choice of phrasing leaves me with a haunted feeling - and those final two lines are like a gauntlet thrown. Sometimes facing oneself requires the greatest courage of all.

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    • #4
      This is definitely your style Jon and has quite an impact.

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      • Parkinsonspoet
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        thank you I am delighted with your feedback
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