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  • On the naughty step


    I spy with my one eye
    My prey as it goes by
    From my step on the stair
    Ready to pounce from my lair
    Reach out swipe with paw
    Try to catch it with a claw
    It reacts and pulls away
    Escaping from my play
    Wait for another try
    I spy with my one eye

  • #2
    Kitty, needy,
    swiping out paw
    Fun-time speedy
    on each pass draw
    Game-lay in wait
    ...anticipate...
    Next time - he's mine!

    Thanks for this light-hearted look at your furry companion Jon!

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    • Parkinsonspoet
      Parkinsonspoet commented
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      Thank you I see you mastered the ha sonnet

    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Thank you. I'm not sure if I've mastered it, but it is a very fun form to write. It lends itself to playfulness, and I enjoy that. Hope you don't mind. I can try to desist if it's a nuisance.

  • #3
    Queen Ha Sonnet
    Rhyme Loving write
    Always Welcome
    Poets delight
    Hits the right tone
    Post in the zone
    Nice write so right

    for you RhymeLovingWriter

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    • RhymeLovingWriter
      RhymeLovingWriter commented
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      Just wonderful! I'd say you've mastered the ha'sonnet form for yourself! Thank you kindly for such sweet words.

  • #4
    Lovely Kitty, always waiting and lovely verse too.

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    • #5
      Nice pics and poem. Made me smile.

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      • Parkinsonspoet
        Parkinsonspoet commented
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        Thank you. I am lucky Tom makes me smile a lot
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