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    from Amenora's As We Each Answer)
    Ars Amoris


    Eight Billion souls

    each a Universe entire

    separate but parallel

    lives,ratios of signal

    buried in noise.

    Lost to consciousness,

    communicants of desire,

    what art makes them cohere?
    Last edited by Johntee; 02-16-2018, 04:15 AM.

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    lovely, this really is lovely. ponderous piece. Yes--Love and Passion, hand in hand, burning together. Kudos!

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    • Johntee
      Johntee commented
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      Ponderous makes me think of Walt Disney's "Fantasia"
      and the ballet dancing hippos but ponderous rightly does
      mean weighty so thanks. I altered the 'signal to noise'
      line to get a rhyme on the end
      Last edited by Johntee; 02-16-2018, 04:21 AM.
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