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  • That Stubborn Old Elephant - ha'sonnet

    That stubborn
    Old elephant
    With the rubber
    Impediment
    Uses his trunk
    To get quite drunk
    Too jive to drive

  • #2
    Brought a smile to my face MH. Good to see you posting here again. We’ve missed you.

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    • #3
      Behemoth, sotted,
      (on the juice)
      was lately spotted
      in the sluice.
      Soon channel deep
      became his keep.
      New digs? Zoo brigs.


      MHenry - it does my heart good to see your name in the queue and your wit in the verse!


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      • #4
        It's good to be back among friends, AlexandratheLate!

        Good response ha'sonnet, RhymeLovingWriter!

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        • #5
          smiles all round lets celebrate with the elephant

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          • #6
            Party with pool
            Cue if able
            Pocket your balls
            From the table
            Break of seven
            Chalk for heaven
            Attack the black
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            • #7
              Very nice, Pp! The last line is the hardest (or is it the first cut is the deepest?)

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              • Parkinsonspoet
                Parkinsonspoet commented
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                I like this form but that is partly because it allies so well with your sense of fun

              • Muttado1sb
                Muttado1sb commented
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                The last lines. I gather and save them as they come to me. Then I have to find poems to put above them, which is easier than finding the last line for a poem.

            • #8
              Elephants Trunk
              rhyming slang
              for another little drink
              when already,
              slack-legged
              too readily,
              wine has flowed
              into the crumpled
              form that follows.

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              • #9
                Classic MHenry!!

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                • #10
                  The MHenry ha'sonnet humor back and in good form!

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