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    Within My Heart

    Tear my flesh, I bleed you
    Your heart lies deep inside
    If you fall I feel your pain
    When lost you are my guide

    You are in my music
    The notes in every score
    That catchy tune I sing to
    Wanting to hear more

    Tightly bound we speak as one
    In voice, in heart and mind
    Deep seated understanding
    These days you rarely find

    I can hear you
    in the silence
    Even when apart
    Always inside of me
    You beat within my heart

  • #2
    I feel your connection here a powerful write

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  • #3
    Interiority tied tight.
    The ribboned Beau
    a loving heart.
    Last edited by Johntee; 02-16-2018, 05:32 AM.

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    • mooneyblack
      mooneyblack commented
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      Thanks Johntee

  • #4
    This poem is so sweet I can actually taste it!Lol! Wonderfully executed! Bravo mooneyblack!

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  • #5
    I could see this on a card. Beautiful.

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  • #6
    Now THAT's communion.

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    • mooneyblack
      mooneyblack commented
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      Thank you, Paula, you can relate!

  • #7
    I find this appropriate for all the family members of the fallen due to gun violence. Sad but beautiful.

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    • mooneyblack
      mooneyblack commented
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      Thank you Bobby
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