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Cupid’s Dart (With Apologies to Longfellow)

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  • Cupid’s Dart (With Apologies to Longfellow)

    I shot an arrow in the air
    with lots of thought and aimed with care
    A Cupid’s dart sent towards my love
    whom I am undeserving of

    I sang a song into the air
    a song of love written with care
    Sung for the love I call my own
    into whose heart I hope I've grown

    Too late alas I realized
    that Cupid’s darts are pencil sized
    and mythical, not real at all
    My love no longer mine to call
    Last edited by Muttado1sb; 02-13-2018, 06:18 PM.

  • #2
    The flight of words
    brought to earth,
    stanza 3
    shows their worth.


    • Muttado1sb
      Muttado1sb commented
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      Thanks, Johntee! Even little misunderstandings can lead to big mistakes.