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  • My Valentine - a ha'sonnet

    My Valentine's
    Gone far away
    To warmer climes
    I'm sad to say
    She flew the coop
    With a cockatoo
    and broke my yolk

  • #2
    Love it MH. You really get to the ❤️ Of the matter!

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    • #3
      How could she part
      your fair embrace
      and break your heart
      with 'feather-face'?
      It's really mean
      to paint such scene.
      But gee....you're free.

      Happy Valentines Day MHenry ! Hope it's all fun and games again soon.

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      • Muttado1sb
        Muttado1sb commented
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        Fun one, RLW! ‘Feather-face’ Ha!

    • #4
      Hi, Bobby! Great, RLW, as always!

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      • #5
        As always you bring a smile

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        • #6

          My Valentine- Aha songlet





          My Valentine

          Just had to be

          Where sun shines on TV

          Flew Lanzarote

          And did touch me

          Sun dress for real

          Brought me to heels

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          • Muttado1sb
            Muttado1sb commented
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            Ha! That is quite the mix in your seven lines, Parkinsonspoet! Nice!

        • #7
          Never heard of Lanzarote, Pp. Had to go look it up! Nice touch and recognizably Pp!

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          • Parkinsonspoet
            Parkinsonspoet commented
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            MHenry see what chaos you inspire -the pop group Aha, transvestites and Lanzarote all just in 7 lines

        • #8
          Lol. Glad to read your funny valentine!

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          • #9
            How Dumb Am I

            Tell me something
            do I look dumb
            Was I a string
            for her to strum
            I thought she cared
            My heart I bared
            Idiot me

            And you lost to a cockatoo. Nice to see you posting again, MHenry!

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            • Parkinsonspoet
              Parkinsonspoet commented
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              I like this it made me smile

            • Muttado1sb
              Muttado1sb commented
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              Thank you, Parkinsonspoet!

          • #10
            Good one M1!
            Clever last line rhyme!

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            • Muttado1sb
              Muttado1sb commented
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              Thanks, MHenry! I had the last line sitting around waiting for the right poem. It worked well in this. And then this worked well with what you wrote.
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