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  • Paranoia

    Chills running down my spine, drinking deaths wine,
    Paranoia inside my head, don't know if i'm alive or i'm dead,
    your redemption is all I need, to save me from my own deception,
    all i've got is an old song, but i've gotta stay strong
    Chills running down my spine, trying to escape my own reflection,

    The sounds, the smells, takes me to the past,
    when time stood still and horizon were vast,
    the past, the present and the future were one
    and I never felt alone

  • #2
    I like that -do you write songs _ it felt songlike to me

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    • Ghostwriter
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      Sorry for the late reply, but i've been really busy lately. Yeah, I used to write songs and now i'm more focused on lyric writing than composing, because I try to improve my lyrics so I can Improve my songwriting as well. ^^

  • #3
    It is very lyrical, as Parkinsonspoet said. Interesting read, Ghost! I really like the play of the title, Paranoia, against the last line, ‘I never felt alone’

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    • Ghostwriter
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      I'm glad you enjoyed it and yeah it was intended for a song, but ended being just poetry. If you can call it that. Hah!

  • #4
    This speaks to me of someone harking back to happier times where they were comfortable, knew their role and felt safe. Perhaps a hint of PTSD about it too but maybe I'm reading too much into it?

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    • Ghostwriter
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      I'm not really sure, but I think it could be openly interpreted, but yeah the general theme could be someone who's looking back at happier times. It's not really done yet and i'm probably going to write another and improved version of it in the future. ^^
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