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  • The Dark Side of the Moon (for lunarglide)

    Once you counted on your fingers
    With the surety
    Of childhood’s blessing
    But the dead
    In their untold generations
    Have erased that truth
    They without number like the stars
    No longer stitched to names
    Come closer
    To whisper and congregate nearby

    A shawl draped on your thoughts
    That haunts you
    Like a doppelganger
    Which you thought you could hide from
    In stealth
    In profound silence
    In the shadow of craters
    On the dark side of the moon
    Out of sight
    Of their come hither beckoning


  • #2
    I really like this Tanner.

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    • #3
      Thank you for sharing this! Im honored that you thought of me with this one.

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      • #4
        No darkside to the moon
        only a side unseen.
        No darkside from the sun
        only the mind of man.
        Last edited by Johntee; 02-05-2018, 06:53 AM.

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        • #5
          Tanner, brilliant! Just brilliant!

          This whole piece is a poetic gem, with philosophical depth.

          It it spoke to me, as mortality is a theme I have forever found fascinating.

          I especially liked this:

          In profound silence
          In the shadow of craters
          On the dark side of the moon
          Out of sight
          Of their come hither beckoning

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          • #6
            Ah, wonderful, Tanner! Just as childhood innocence goes away, death, death cannot he denied no matter where you try to hide.
            Last edited by Muttado1sb; 02-09-2018, 10:27 PM.

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            • #7
              top drawer as Grant might say you are in great form here

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              • #8
                Read, re-read and will do so often - stunning

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