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  • The Revenant

    Leaving
    Fleeing
    Hiding away
    A gunshot to the heart

    Fighting
    Dying
    Shrinking away
    Into the shadows of the dark

    Never to wake
    Never to wake, again

    Departing
    Vanishing
    Cutting all contact
    This melancholic mood

    Crying
    Seething
    No goodbyes
    They only do more harm than good

    Never to wake
    Never to wake, again
    Never to rise
    Never to rise up from the dust
    Ever again
    Until there comes a point
    When I must
    Face this again

    If I made the decision
    To face this again
    Can I leave behind the past
    And feel alive, again?

    I thought this wasn't for me
    I thought they never needed me
    Can I rebuild of what seemed lost
    If there's anything new to see?

    I thought that I wouldn't dare
    I thought you would never
    Return to me
    Can we just forget the trouble we had
    And start all over again
    If there is new light to see?

    Thinking
    Brooding
    Contemplating
    If this was for the best

    The past, the future
    The hate, the love, the memories
    Overwhelming me
    Take this burden right off my chest
    So I can wake again

  • #2
    To return to what you’ve left behind, to have to restart what you thought had ended, you really show the confusion and realization with this, Bry!

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    • Bry89
      Bry89 commented
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      Thanks very much, once again

  • #3
    I agree with Mutaddo and you expressed the burden, frustration of it all. Nicely done Bry

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    • #4
      I agree with the others!

      Your style and diction really punctuate the theme!

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      • #5
        Nightmare situation well described!

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